I sat slowly on that beach
on that line where the land meet the water,
i laid my hands in the salty tears of the earth
sinking deep into thoughts that caressed my mind
like the swift sea breeze that flew around me
the time rolled around and i saw the waves washing away
my flesh, the sun bleaching my bones
I feel pain but For what shall i cry to stop my pain
this is life ,you should stop the heart to stop hurt
I laid back in the sand bellowing like thunderous sky
adding more and more salt into the sea water
but what shall it bring back, time has rolled gathering no love
I am left alone in this shore like a butterfly that dreamt to fly
but the wings burned when the sun beat down over this shore
on that line where the land meet the water,
i laid my hands in the salty tears of the earth
sinking deep into thoughts that caressed my mind
like the swift sea breeze that flew around me
the time rolled around and i saw the waves washing away
my flesh, the sun bleaching my bones
I feel pain but For what shall i cry to stop my pain
this is life ,you should stop the heart to stop hurt
I laid back in the sand bellowing like thunderous sky
adding more and more salt into the sea water
but what shall it bring back, time has rolled gathering no love
I am left alone in this shore like a butterfly that dreamt to fly
but the wings burned when the sun beat down over this shore
You asked about your poetry on the quora website, where I gave a reply and I am giving this edited version of your poem here as well, thanks to the Grammarly dotcom website check and a few edits I made, too:
ReplyDeleteOn The Sea Shore
I sat slowly on that beach,
On that line where the land meets the water,
I laid my hands in the salty tears of the earth,
Sinking deep into thoughts that caressed my mind,
Like the swift sea breeze that flew around me...
The time rolled around and I saw the waves,
Washing away my flesh, the sun bleaching my bones...
I feel pain, but for what shall I cry to stop my pain?
This is life, you should stop the heart to stop the hurt...
I laid back in the sand, bellowing like thunderous sky,
Adding more and more salt into the sea water,
But what shall it bring back?
Time has rolled along, gathering no love,
I am left alone on this shore,
Like a butterfly that dreamt of flying, but the wings burned
When the sun beat down over this shore...